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فاضل الجابر
29-07-2002, 16:08
Hope you feel it

Your love
Transcending life & death
And I was there inside
Leaving the world
For you alone
To hide
So I thought
You’ll never be
No way you look at me
Cause now
I fell unwanted
No one to care
Nothing has left
For me
And I know
It was all untrue
I’m crying the night
For you
So please
Never let go
Open your heart
Show me your light
Ending my dark shadow

thanx for your time

العنقاء
29-07-2002, 23:07
At certain moments of depression, one really feels unwanted but this feeling vanishes.. Just believe in yourself

Oh are thes wors really yours? They are just adorable!

فاضل الجابر
30-07-2002, 09:25
Dear Jane

Thanx for the compliment and yes these are my words.

The Shadow

icecream_lover
31-07-2002, 00:26
Hi "The Shadow"

It is difficult to combine between simplicity and diving in deep meanings
but I can see that clearly in your words

Thanks for your trust
Go ahead, don't stop writing
and don't forget to share us what you write :)

Hasan Ali
31-07-2002, 08:32
My dear ,
What else can I say about your words than to say .. perfect ..?
perfect in the deep meanings and perfect in using the words ..

I like your style, the way you write..

keep pozting & keep yourzelf in good mood and high zpirit

فاضل الجابر
31-07-2002, 13:14
Wallahi you put me in a position that I can never express my gratitude and thanx to you all, thanx for every little word you put here.

Hope for better things in the near future

The Shadow