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العنقاء
28-07-2002, 18:18
This is a poem I wrote I hope you like it



She was far away
She was all alone
On a virgin land
She searched the place
For someone there
So they could share
The virgin land
They could build a nest
For love and care
But there was one
On the virgin land
She was Maria
But now Echo
In a moonlit night
She went to pray
To pray her Lord
With lots of tears
To set her free
Or to make her real

فاضل الجابر
28-07-2002, 18:42
nice try dear Jane

Keep the good work up and running

The Shadow

دانيال
29-07-2002, 22:03
like someone who thirst in the middle of the desert and he searched for drinking water and at seem for him from far away there is water but

when he approached to the target place this is the fact it is mirage
yh yh it is mirage.


Thank u

And

I said to u Dr. Jane_Austen

iam really benefit from u as active member

and I hope the remainder of members follow u as choosing the nice topics